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Wednesday 1 January 2020

Summer learning journey

Summer learning journey


These school holidays I am participating in the summer learning journey. I have enjoyed so far and I hope I continue to the activities are fun and entertaining. So that keeps occupied when I am bored.


or this activity, listen to the podcast of Yusra Mardini or read her story on her personal website.
On your blog, retell the story of this amazing young woman from Syria.

My retailing.
Yusra Mardini was on a ship that was 15 minutes into the sea when they found out that the engine was failing.   she saved the life of 20 people. A year later she was in the Olympic games in Rio 2016 she now aims to compete in the Olympic Games in Tokyo in 2020.

My next step is to retell more and remember more.
Is there anything you think I could do to improve my blog post?

2 comments:

  1. Hey Lacie!

    My name is Natasha, I'm from Hornby High and I'm going to be taking a look at some of your Summer Learning Journey blog posts throughout the remainder of the holidays.

    I like how you've explained what the Summer Learning Journey is at the start of the post along with what the activity is. I also like how much detail you've gone into with your retelling.

    Have you considered including images in your posts? It would make them even more interesting for readers and draw more attention to your blog :)

    Would you ever want to compete in the Olympics?

    Awesome post Lacie, looking forward to seeing more work from you in the future :)

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    1. Hi Natasha it is Lacie here. Thank you for looking at my blog. Yes I have looked at adding images to my blog post. Yes it would make them more interesting a for the readers.

      I dont think I would ever want to compete in the olympics.

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