I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Lacie it's Hunter from Rata class just checking out your blog. You have some pretty cool stuff on your blog. But I like this post because of the cool Alien that you made. This reminds me of when Mr C was in our class because we drew our own Alien. Some advice is to change the color of the words on the 3rd slide. That's all from me BLOG YOU LATER!!!!!!!!!
Hi Lacie its Nirvana from Rata class just looking at your work and this is some cool stuff you are doing. But I think you can add more about this and why we are at earth today. Why we like earth and how came to be. well bye Nirvana
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ReplyDeleteHi Lacie it's Hunter from Rata class just checking out your blog. You have some pretty cool stuff on your blog. But I like this post because of the cool Alien that you made. This reminds me of when Mr C was in our class because we drew our own Alien. Some advice is to change the color of the words on the 3rd slide. That's all from me BLOG YOU LATER!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteHi Hunter thank you for the advice i will chance the color on the third slide.that all from me
DeleteHi Lacie its Nirvana from Rata class just looking at your work and this is some cool stuff you are doing. But I think you can add more about this and why we are at earth today. Why we like earth and how came to be. well bye Nirvana
ReplyDeletekia ora Nirvana thank you for the very helpful blog comment it helps me alot when people comment on my blog
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ReplyDeleteI like how you did an alien. but next time could you do more slides and add more detail about space. blog you later.
kia ora Emalea thank you for the very helpful blog comment.
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