My next steps in writing
For sentence structure my next steps are to make sure I choose the right sentence to show the reader what I want them to know ,
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
For sentence structure my next steps are to make sure I choose the right sentence to show the reader what I want them to know ,
Today I did the 100 word challenge, It is when you have a picture or video to write 100 words about there are usually two pictures to choose from every week, I chose to do this Picture:
one day there was an animal called Isla she had no idea what type of animal she was until one day she found 200 penguins and one of them kept on calling Isla so she thought maybe she is a penguin and then she found out that the penguin was her mum so after 5 years trying to find her family she finally found them and it was just a coupe of days before Christmas so she was so excited that was the best Christmas present she had ever had. She thought that she was the luckiest penguin ever.
Focus. What do I want? Be able to get to all the checkpoints
Action. What am i doing to get what i want? Jumping and completing levels
Role. Who am I? Crash Bandicoot
Tension. What's in my way? the Jumps and gaps
Space/Time. When where am I As long as it takes
Kate Sheppard Reading Comprehension
Answer the following questions in full sentences,
aiming for 2-3 sentences for each!
Where was Kate Sheppard born?
She was born in Liverpool which is england in 1847 and then moved to Christchurch in New Zealand in 1668 and got married in 1871.
Why do you think Kate Sheppard was chosen to be on the $10 note? (write a paragraph)
She is on the $10 note because she is a New Zealand hero, Because she is the lady who made women be able to vote. SHe was in the Women's christian Temperance Union in New Zealand to help the poor. |
What was Kate Sheppard fighting for, how did she achieve it? (write a paragraph)
She was trying to make women be able to vote and then she went and wrote a petition and got men to sign it. There were over 2500 people who signed it. Then it went to the prime minister or someone and they agreed with it,SHe only had 6 weeks to get people to sign it. |
What are three actions Kate Sheppard took in her quest to allow women the right to vote?
Made a petition
Got heaps of people to sign the petition.
Took it to the parliament to get them to accept the petition.
What do you think Kate Sheppard would feel knowing Jacinda Ardern is our Prime Minister now? Why would she feel that way?
I think that she would be happy because Jacinda is helping out New Zealand.
Make a copy and fill in the timeline of main events from Kate Sheppard’s life.
Use Images With Permission (like we learned in Cybersmart)
Share your final copy to your blog
Save in HUR1 folder