Snowy Day
Today in class we got given a picture to write about we had to start by looking at the top left corner and write about what it was and make sure it was descriptive, Then we wrote about what it was in the top right corner and then we had to add what we saw in the bottom part of the picture. We had to add in a character I chose to add a dog to my story. Then we had to add what our character was doing. We also had to add a problem and then how the problem got fixed.
On a nice night it started snowing and it was landing in the trees. The house roof and windows got covered in the snow, The snow was still landing in the trees. There is another little house behind that looks like it is completely covered with snow. The snow was setting on the ground and all threw out the trees there was lots of snow. There was a dog stuck outside in the snow it was crying and shivering it must of been extremely cold.
The dog was a golden retriever her name was Ellie. She was an extremely careful dog she never hurt anyone. She was trying to get out of the snow that just randomly fell out of the sky that she did not notice was going to happen. She was moving backwards and forwards and side to side but she could not get out at all.
The problem is that Ellie is stuck in the snow and can get out. She has tried by moving in different directions. She started yelping and barking to try to get her owners attention but she thinks that they could be asleep. The snow was freezing her little paws she could barley feel them they were going numb from all of the coldness.
The neighbour heard the dog barking and went outside to find out what was wrong, He saw the dog stuck in the snow. He ran across the slippery snow nearly falling over a few times when he go there he lifted Ellie out of the snow and went on knocked on the door at her house they did not answer you could hear them snoring really loud. So he decided to take the dog to his house and he had the fire lit so she layed in front of it and went to sleep when she woke up in the morning she returned back to her house.
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