I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
bonjour lacie this is a really cool animation but i think you need to change how its black then your like somewhere else. you should put a road so it looks like you actually went somewhere. :)
Kia ora Lacie Sita here. This is a cool animation I really like all the detail you put in this. I also like how you made the dog go to all kinds of different places. I find it quite funny aswell. I have a question.... How long did it take you to make this? Reply back and answer. Thats all for now. BYEEE!!!:):):)
Talofa Lava Lacie Milan here well this was really good and that you have done such an amazing job that you have done and you should do more of it in your free time, well um you have done well but it seem that it was kind of boring and that it was just so short even though there was a lot of the slide anyway hope you've done this well and that you will try my advice. Bye
kia ora millan thank you for this lovley blog post and I am sorry about it being boring. I will defentiley try some if your advice but maybe it will have to be in my next animation that I am going to make today
Hi, That is a quite long story. When is it going to be continued? Why did you chose the main character to be a dog? How can the dog can talk? I have so many questions to ask you but 10 minutes means 600 seconds. Your animation is so amazing! Keep up the good work.
kia ora stephanie thank you for this very helpful blog comment. It will probabley be countiuned in the next school holidays because In the weekend I am always doing school work and publishing it on my blog. Yes I did know that ten minutes was actually 600 secands. the dog was actually magic that is why he could talk.
Kia ora Lacie! Ashrita here, I like your animation. I like the settings you put into the animation. This is a lot of work for 10 minutes. For me it would take me like 30 years to actually finish one lol. Question why did you chose a puppy instead of a human? Anyways good work. Cya
kia ora Ashrita thank you for this blog comment. I know it was a lot for 10 minutes. Why did I choose the main charcter to be a dog is because dogs look better on animations and It is funny when they go into the mall
Hi Lacie its Lachlan here well this was really good and that you have done such an amazing job that you have done and you should do more of it in your free time, well um you have done well but it seem that it was kind of boring and that it was just so short even though there was a lot of the slide anyway hope you've done this well and that you will try my advice. Bye
Hi it`s Chelsea I like what you have done and 137 slides in 10 minutes that is not bad for that time. Next time you can put a capital I in your sentence. Keep it up blog ya later.
Talofa lava Nirvna thank you for the blog comment and I will be countioned in the next school holidays because in the weekends I am always doing schoolwork.
Fakalofa lahi atu Lacie This slide is very good! Maybe when you do the next one you could put a link to the next slide! Can you please inform me when the next one is made? Bye for now!
kia ora safiyya thank you for the blog comment. I will try some of your advice in my next animation. yes I will fill you in when the next one is made I might just share it to you.
Hi Lacie It's me Elham. Wow I can't believe you did this just for 10 minutes is was soo long that I couldn't even do it in 10 minutes. Next time maybe you put more information when you are writing a blog post also next time check you capital letters.
Hi, Hunter here I like this post because of the puppy. This reminds me of my nan's dog. Some advice is to have a introduction at the top. That's all from me BLOG YOU LATER!!!!
nia hao hunter thank you for you taking your time to comment on my blog. I have one question for ou what was your nanas dogs name? I will try some of your advice in my next animation.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
bonjour lacie this is a really cool animation but i think you need to change how its black then your like somewhere else. you should put a road so it looks like you actually went somewhere. :)
ReplyDeletekia ora tru thank you for this very helpful blog comment on my next aniamtion I will try that
DeleteHi it Dani here this is awesome just could you make sense because at the start you say lets who lets but awesome.
ReplyDeletekia ora dani thank you for this bog comment. sorry about that mistake.
DeleteHI it is Angus I like how you did it because you were bored but next time make it make sense like 4:500pm it should be like 5oo:pm
ReplyDeletekia ora angus thank you for this blog comment it is meant to say 4:50 pm so sorry about the mistake
DeleteKia ora Lacie Sita here.
ReplyDeleteThis is a cool animation I really like all the detail you put in this.
I also like how you made the dog go to all kinds of different places.
I find it quite funny aswell. I have a question.... How long did it take you to make this? Reply back and answer.
Thats all for now.
BYEEE!!!:):):)
hi sita thank you for this comment it really helped me. it took me ten minutes to make this.
DeleteHi its Chloe
ReplyDeleteLove seeing all these lovely animations people have to share.
You have done and amazing job at this and I hope to see more in the future.
Maybe next time use a dog that is facing on its side for when its on the bed.
Just a question when the talks can dogs actully talk?
Anyways I'll blog you later
kia ora chloe thank you ffor this very helpful blog comment and no dogs can not actially talk.
DeleteTalofa Lava Lacie
ReplyDeleteMilan here well this was really good and that you have done such an amazing job that you have done and you should do more of it in your free time, well um you have done well but it seem that it was kind of boring and that it was just so short even though there was a lot of the slide anyway hope you've done this well and that you will try my advice. Bye
kia ora millan thank you for this lovley blog post and I am sorry about it being boring. I will defentiley try some if your advice but maybe it will have to be in my next animation that I am going to make today
DeleteHi Lacie,
ReplyDeleteI played this animation and it is good for a long animation. When the puppy is talking you should duplicate like 4 slides. Bye
kia ora karrem thank you for this blog coment and I will try to duplicate some slides in my next anmation
DeleteHi lacie It Is Bailey here well done on your animation i like that dog and keep it up.
ReplyDeletekia ora baily thank you for this blog comment but it does not have a thoughtful helpful or positive sentance.
DeleteHi, That is a quite long story. When is it going to be continued? Why did you chose the main character to be a dog? How can the dog can talk? I have so many questions to ask you but 10 minutes means 600 seconds. Your animation is so amazing!
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work.
kia ora stephanie thank you for this very helpful blog comment. It will probabley be countiuned in the next school holidays because In the weekend I am always doing school work and publishing it on my blog. Yes I did know that ten minutes was actually 600 secands. the dog was actually magic that is why he could talk.
DeleteKia ora Lacie!
ReplyDeleteAshrita here, I like your animation. I like the settings you put into the animation. This is a lot of work for 10 minutes. For me it would take me like 30 years to actually finish one lol.
Question why did you chose a puppy instead of a human?
Anyways good work.
Cya
kia ora Ashrita thank you for this blog comment. I know it was a lot for 10 minutes. Why did I choose the main charcter to be a dog is because dogs look better on animations and It is funny when they go into the mall
DeleteHi Lacie its Lachlan here well this was really good and that you have done such an amazing job that you have done and you should do more of it in your free time, well um you have done well but it seem that it was kind of boring and that it was just so short even though there was a lot of the slide anyway hope you've done this well and that you will try my advice. Bye
ReplyDeletekia ora lachlan thank you for the blog comment but it seems a bit weird because you have got the same comment as millan so I wonder if you copyed her?
DeleteHi it`s Chelsea
ReplyDeleteI like what you have done and 137 slides in 10 minutes that is not bad for that time. Next time you can put a capital I in your sentence. Keep it up blog ya later.
kia ora chelsea thank you for the blog comment and I am sorry I did go through to make sure there was capitals but I think I went past that one.
DeleteTalofa Lava Lacie
ReplyDeleteNirvana here this is great. But 137 is alot and it need wrok countiouned it I think greaat strat BYe
Talofa lava Nirvna thank you for the blog comment and I will be countioned in the next school holidays because in the weekends I am always doing schoolwork.
DeleteFakalofa lahi atu Lacie
ReplyDeleteThis slide is very good!
Maybe when you do the next one you could put a link to the next slide!
Can you please inform me when the next one is made?
Bye for now!
kia ora safiyya thank you for the blog comment. I will try some of your advice in my next animation. yes I will fill you in when the next one is made I might just share it to you.
Deletehi, its brooklyn next time maybe you could be more pacific about your slides
ReplyDeletekia ora brooklyn thank you for the blog comment but maybe next time put a thoughtful helpful and postive sentance in all your blog comments.
DeleteHi Lacie It's me Elham.
ReplyDeleteWow I can't believe you did this just for 10 minutes is was soo long that I couldn't even do it in 10 minutes.
Next time maybe you put more information when you are writing a blog post also next time check you capital letters.
ciao Elham thank you for the blog comment. I will try some of your advice in my next animation.
DeleteKia ora Lacie Emily here.
ReplyDeleteI love Your Animation Lacie it is creative. Maybe next time add an intro and add my colour into the end sentence.
Namastae EMily thank you for your blog comment I will deffentley use your advice in my animation
DeleteHi, Hunter here I like this post because of the puppy. This reminds me of my nan's dog. Some advice is to have a introduction at the top. That's all from me BLOG YOU LATER!!!!
ReplyDeletenia hao hunter thank you for you taking your time to comment on my blog. I have one question for ou what was your nanas dogs name? I will try some of your advice in my next animation.
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