I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Malo e lelei Lacie. Well done for getting this completed and also posted to your blog. Part of the activity was to say what you will do to help all of us meet this school expectation. What is one thing that you might do?
Kia Ora Miss Waho it is Lacie here. Thank you for this comment on my blog. If I see rubbish around the classrooms I will pick it up and put it in the bin.
Malo e lelei Lacie, I really liked how you put in the different colours in your own post, it is very creative. But maybe you could probably add spelling corrections in your writing. and maybe you could put those ratings beside the text boxes you have added to make it more tidy. And maybe a little bit more decoration around the outside of your list. Amazing effort anyway!
Malo e lelei Lacie, I really like your google drawing and how you rated yourself on how well you did these things. Maybe next time you could come up with your own ideas of how you can keep you space nice and tidy. Blog you later.
Malo e lelei Lacie, Wow! you have done such a great job on this post! Would you do anything else to help the class environment? and where did you get this digital tool from? Maybe next time add why you're doing this. Welp that's all from me, BYEEEEEE.
Kia ora Courtney it is Lacie here. Thank you for this comment on my blog. Yes there is other ways I could keep the class envirourment clean but this is all I could think of so far.
Malo e Lelei Lacie! Great effort on the drawing of keeping the class environment clean! Next time you could put the ratings in a different text box next to it, make it look more tidy. You know Miss Waho likes tidiness! Other than that, amazing job! Bye!
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Malo e lelei Lacie.
ReplyDeleteWell done for getting this completed and also posted to your blog. Part of the activity was to say what you will do to help all of us meet this school expectation. What is one thing that you might do?
Kia Ora Miss Waho it is Lacie here.
DeleteThank you for this comment on my blog.
If I see rubbish around the classrooms I will pick it up and put it in the bin.
Malo e lelei Lacie, I really liked how you put in the different colours in your own post, it is very creative. But maybe you could probably add spelling corrections in your writing. and maybe you could put those ratings beside the text boxes you have added to make it more tidy. And maybe a little bit more decoration around the outside of your list. Amazing effort anyway!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Stephanie it is Lacie here.
DeleteThank you for this comment on my blog.
Remember not to start a sentance with and.
Malo e lelei Lacie,
ReplyDeleteI really like your google drawing and how you rated yourself on how well you did these things. Maybe next time you could come up with your own ideas of how you can keep you space nice and tidy.
Blog you later.
Kia Ora Nalanee it is Lacie here.
DeleteThank you for your comment on my blog.
Next time I will do what you said to improve my blog post.
Malo e lelei Lacie,
ReplyDeleteWow! you have done such a great job on this post!
Would you do anything else to help the class environment? and where did you get this digital tool from?
Maybe next time add why you're doing this. Welp that's all from me, BYEEEEEE.
Kia ora Courtney it is Lacie here.
DeleteThank you for this comment on my blog.
Yes there is other ways I could keep the class envirourment clean but this is all I could think of so far.
Malo e Lelei Lacie!
ReplyDeleteGreat effort on the drawing of keeping the class environment clean! Next time you could put the ratings in a different text box next to it, make it look more tidy. You know Miss Waho likes tidiness! Other than that, amazing job!
Bye!
P.S. Great colour use!
Kia ora Shyla it is Lacie here.
DeleteThank you for this comment on my blog and yes I do know miss Waho like tidiness.