I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I was swimming down the river then suddenly I turned into a unicorn and I turned back into a mermaid. Then i seen a shark it scared me so I started screaming. Then I turned into a person. And was riding a unicorn. Then I woke up. my dream.
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omg what a good dream i wish i dream of that
ReplyDeleteHi Azire thank you for the comment but it does not have a thought full positive and helpful sentance
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