I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Friday, 2 June 2017
the day latin hurt his leg this slide is what my class has been doing for writing
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Good job with your writing but were is your fall stop.
ReplyDeleteHi bailey thank you for this blog comment but it does not have a thoughtful helpful or positvie sentance.
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